Grammatical Errors

[Princeps]

I'm slowly devouring the info in the Emperors list, I've seen a few grammatical/linguistic errors so far. I will post them in this thread if there is any chance of them being corrected. If not just say the word and I shall cease and decist. (p.s, I don't want to seem like an ass, but this site is very well presented with extremely accurate info, it seems a shame to have grammatical errors included in the text).

 

From Severus (very near the bottom of the page)-

 

Severus army, torn between their loyalty of two emperors then mutinied. When even Severus's praetorian prefect turned against him and started promising bonuses to men who would change their allegiance Severus faith was sealed. Little else he could do but withdraw quickly and so he fled with the remaining men that were loyal to him to Ravenna. Maximian pursued him with his troops, cought up with him in Ravenna, and with false promise of safty convinced Severus to surrender.

 

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[Primus Pilus]

The emperor pages (anything currently after Nero) were painstakingly compiled by Viggen, whose first language is German. Sometimes everything doesn't quite translate perfectly so I try to edit, but apparantly missed that page

 

Thanks Trajen.

[Primus Pilus]

Also, as we don't have editors, other than eachother, its very likely that there will be periodic spelling errors, etc. on various pages. As always, please continue to point them out. If you've ever written anything you know how easily mistakes blend in when its your own work.