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The World is a Less Safe Place to Drive In.

Antiochus of Seleucia

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I got my license. :lol:

 

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I wrote this story for my writing workshop class. You can tell I didn't have a good day.

 

I arrived to the pit before the sun rose. It was cold and wet outside; the slush oozed from beneath my feet like stepping on a bug. Through the doors I entered. I took a left, my eyes squinting. The walls were white, the floors were white, the ceiling was white- and the lights were bright. I trudged up some stairs, each step more painful than the last. The garbage bag on my back seemed heavier each stair. After another white-washed hallway I arrived to my little personal blue box. The blue box was a small rectangular garbage can-like enclosure with a small lock on the front. After fumbling with the security lock, I managed to open the rusty door with a creak and proceeded to dump my garbage in. Another day has begun! I want to go home.

 

Instinctively I worked my way through several more blinding mazes until I reached this certain room- if one asks where it is, you know where it is in your mind, but can not explain it. I entered the room through a slit in the wall, single file with other pale, soulless entities to the front and back. This room was cold

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Gaius Octavius

Good grief! Another kid, who ain't old enough to drink or vote, roaming the by-ways in search of me. Warning!, stay away from 'SPQR', I have steel bumpers and weigh two tons! :P

U 2, U :mummy:

 

:lol:

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Gaius Octavius

:P Loud music (?) ? How you gonna hear the guy beeping at you to tell you that your tail pipe is belching fire? And that mosquito trying to practice his handwriting on you? Betcha you are drinking coffee, reading a book and having an important conversation on your cell fone.

When you see 'SPQR', go the other way, IF you know what is best for your future. :P

 

:lol:

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Antiochus of Seleucia

:P Loud music (?) ? How you gonna hear the guy beeping at you to tell you that your tail pipe is belching fire? And that mosquito trying to practice his handwriting on you? Betcha you are drinking coffee, reading a book and having an important conversation on your cell fone.

When you see 'SPQR', go the other way, IF you know what is best for your future. :P

 

:lol:

 

Is your lavish chariot a deep purple with those cheapy-gold foil tire rims? ;)

A little eagle insignia on your antenna? ;)

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Gaius Octavius

Nope! Take a look in my Brooklyn gallery. You probably put the picture in. I could roll over your mini chariot like a Sherman tank and put the remains in my trunk. ;) Note the SPQR plates :hammer:

 

:ph34r:

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Antiochus of Seleucia

I could roll over your mini chariot like a Sherman tank and put the remains in my trunk. ;) Note the SPQR plates :hammer:

 

;)

 

Hah?!? Is that "Panzer" of yours that gas-guzzler in front of the retirement home? HAH! :ph34r: That thing would never catch the likes of my chariot!

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